The Fingers - A Psycho Thriller

tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-354242962012-01-05T16:30:36.209+01:00The Fingers - A Psycho ThrillerMy platform for publishing my story-in-progress, The Fingers.Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comBlogger341100tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-52270605762328610992011-01-31T14:29:00.000+01:002011-01-31T14:29:47.185+01:00Green Tea instead of Black Coffee (CH07EP08)

When he turned around Patty saw the terror on his face. He didn’t answer when she asked him what was wrong. Then when she moved she felt the sheets tug at her. She looked down and saw the stains in the sheet. The next second she started laughing and he noticed a slight hysteria in her voice. As sudden as she’d started laughing she stopped. He was relieved that she was still alive, but he didn’t

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It had been 45 minutes since he woke up and although the sun was shining right into her eyes, she was still asleep. Since 5 minutes he allowed himself to blink his eyes, but only to be able to tell the time when he would look at the clock. 10 minutes later he noticed that she wasn’t breathing. He hadn’t noticed it before because he was too fixated with her eyes. He panicked. He regained his calm

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They hadn’t made love that night. After they arrived at his house she helped him taking a shower. His wound was still hurting and he was glad that he didn’t have to clean himself. Patty had been very systematic while washing him and never hinted at any romantic intentions that she might have. Although she did seem to spend an unusual amount of time cleaning his privates and she seemed to enjoy

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He didn’t dare to leave his room the next day, although he was allowed to walk around, he stayed in his bed. He wanted to make sure that he would be there, not giving Patty the impression he didn’t care. It wasn’t until 9 PM that night she showed up, looking at him she asked what he’d done that day. She guessed that now he was allowed to walk around he probably had checked out the nurses. He told

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-13917006777232675832010-11-28T21:42:00.001+01:002010-11-28T21:43:03.951+01:00The Nurse (CH07EP04)

The next day he woke up as the nurse opened the curtains and asked him if he was awake. He had dreamed of Bobby, the dog he had as a five-year old boy. The dog had looked up at him, tears in its eyes as he dug his hands into the warm body of the animal. His fingers were replaced by scalpels and with the precision of a seasoned heart surgeon he had cut the dogs organs out, and it was only after he

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As he opened his eyes he saw men in green jackets running around him, a bright light was shining in his face and he wondered what was going on. Once his eyes were adjusted to the light everything made sense, he was in the ER. A familiar voice told him that they had found him on the sidewalk besides his car he had been mugged. He turned his head to the voice and saw Mark standing besides his bed,

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That Wednesday it rained heavily, and he was hesitant of going to the restaurant. Instead he was thinking of calling Mark Sieberts to reschedule their dinner. But as he was dialing the salesman’s number he thought of the two ladies that would join them for dinner. It had been years since he had been with a woman. Kate had been the last woman he had made love to and he admitted to himself that he

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-61733430871643366452010-08-29T20:43:00.000+02:002010-08-29T20:43:37.980+02:00The Salesman (CH07EP01)

The salesman had asked him if he could use his bathroom. It had been 3 years after Jerome had died. After that last time a few days after the funeral he never saw or heard anything from Merry again. He let the salesman in, looking at the merchandize as the salesman was in the bathroom he heard uncle Ray talking to him about the funeral. He decided to buy one of the cordless vacuum cleaners the

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-52476200366694785582010-07-15T23:11:00.000+02:002010-07-15T23:11:57.690+02:00The Humming Noise (CH06E02)

He felt how a sharp object entered his mouth. It cut his tongue loose. He looked up but didn’t see anything. The whole world was covered in blackness. He tried to stand but his legs didn’t have the strength to carry him. His hands moved towards his head. He touched his mouth, to ensure that everything was still there. He felt his tongue, his teeth. He kissed his fingers, happy to feel that

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-4326335963759199662010-05-31T21:00:00.001+02:002010-06-02T22:45:03.541+02:00The Voice (CH06E01)

A high-pitched sound woke him up and he realized that his wounds were healing. He tried to look around but everything was dark. He had to be blind, because his eyelids were removed. He still remembered the agonizing pain he endured while they removed his eyelids. He didn’t remember when he was made blind. He wondered how they’d done it. Did he still have his eyes, or were they taken out of their

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-8533974211158906142010-05-02T21:53:00.000+02:002010-05-02T21:53:03.114+02:00The Funeral (CH05E03)

January second Merry’s uncle Ray came to his house to pick up her personal belongings. He recognized the man from one of the photo’s Merry and Jerome had framed just a few weeks before the accident. Uncle Ray told him that Merry would visit him later that week and she wanted him to attend the funeral, which was the next day. He told uncle Ray to tell Merry that he would be there and that he was

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-35189454412708757562010-04-20T20:07:00.000+02:002010-04-20T20:07:47.397+02:00The Accident (CH05E02)

Jerome turned out to be an excellent craftsman and Merry was quite the cook Jerome had been bragging about. At least once a week she would bake a pie, mostly an apple pie. By the time it got winter and the first snow fell most of the jobs around the house were taken care of and all remaining repairs would have to wait until spring. Jerome had gotten a job in the local pawnshop and Merry had a job

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-10262508771381439932010-03-24T22:06:00.000+01:002010-03-24T22:06:34.074+01:00The Mansion (CH05E01)

He lived in a small village, no more than 500 inhabitants and most of them he knew by name. He had bought a small mansion that required quite some renovation. He enjoyed working on the house and after 2 years he had taken care of all immediate repairs. The house had a new roof as well as completely replaced stairs to all 3 floors. He had decorated most of the rooms. It had cost him a fortune, but

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-6334357977308599372010-03-09T22:49:00.003+01:002010-03-09T23:09:28.871+01:00The Voice (CH04E04)

He had a headache when he regained consciousness. He couldn’t move. He tried to move his arms but didn’t feel anything. He tried to only move his hands, but the only motion he felt was in his fingers. He moved his feet and legs and was surprised he could feel them and had the control over each muscle. Slowly he began to realize his condition, he realized that he couldn’t see anything, although he

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He looked around, but who ever had killed the rat had made very sure that there wouldn’t be a trace to follow, and if he hadn’t been so sure about what had happened he would have thought he’d done it himself. He pushed the woman away; she rolled on her side and let out a gasp. The last air in her lungs had been pushed out, he knew. He looked at her, picked her up and took her to the table. He

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-26729056529556986142010-02-16T21:19:00.001+01:002010-03-09T23:12:49.749+01:00Post Suicide, The Dog (CH04E02)

A month after Kate had committed suicide he had fallen from a ladder. He was working in a newly renovated house he had bought. He had some money from the sale of his business and after buying the house he had sufficient money left to decorate it nicely. To create a new home for himself where he would feel at home. He was painting the ceiling and had been too lazy to steady the ladder. He had made

Iwan Eisinghttps://profiles.google.com/117921912885502820177noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35424296.post-44296011736740702522010-02-05T21:53:00.001+01:002010-03-09T23:07:47.661+01:00The Watch, The Rat and The Woman (CH04E01)

He looked at his watch, two days ago the batteries went dead and he was wondering if they had lasted as long as the salesman had promised him when he bought the watch. It had been cheap, only $14,99. He tried to remember when he bought it and although he could picture the face of the salesman in front of him, he couldn’t get the associated date with it. He tried to count the seasons, saw the open

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She was curious on what was going on and took her son on her arm. Kate went outside over to the door she just saw locked and knocked on it. She looked through the window and saw her husband walking towards the door. He looked bewildered and when he opened the door she saw it wasn’t been her husband who opened the door. She shrieked, but before she could turn around and run away, he had Benjamin

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Mathew greeted him and he asked Mathew to come inside for a moment, because he wanted to discuss Kate’s behavior. Mathew told him he noticed a change in her behavior and asked if the two had talked the day before. He answered that he would rather discuss it while drinking a cup of coffee. Mathew agreed and they went inside, he held the door open for his neighbor and while Mathew stepped inside,

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Another week went by before he saw Kate getting out of her car carrying her groceries to their house. She left the car open and while returning for the second batch of that week’s groceries she saw him closing the car, carrying them. She could do nothing but let him in and while he was putting the paper bags on the kitchen table he asked her why she was avoiding her. She answered that she wasn’t

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The next day they prepared for their trip back, it had been a wonderful time in the mountains and they all felt reluctant to go home, all but Benjamin, who couldn’t wait until he told his kindergarten teacher about his adventures. A week later life was back to normal, almost normal as Kate avoided her neighbor. Mathew asked him if something happened that he should know about between him and Kate,

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Benjamin and Mathew were on the lake, fishing rods ready to catch some ‘big ones’ as they referred to any fish longer than 5 inches. Benjamin had been silent the whole morning and Mathew had tried to find out why, but Benjamin kept his mouth shut. They were now sitting close to the waterfall, and Benjamin had forgotten all about his oath of silence and asked his dad why he and mom had a fight.

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Just before noon he came out of the bushes and approached the deer standing at the edge of the canyon. Unaware of what was behind it, it continued to graze and once it felt the cold hand at its neck it was to late. His right hand went deep into the deer’s neck while his left hand went straight to the animal’s liver. Once he got hold of the liver he took it out, blood spraying all over him. He

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One day he and Benjamin went for swimming, as he heard screams coming from the house. He took the kid out of the water and ordered it to stay next to the car while he was taking care of some business. He walked to the house and heard Mathew accusing his wife of cheating on him. He stopped and listened to Kate denying the accusations, screaming that she knew that her husband was screwing some

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Two weeks later the four of them were on their way to the cabin, Benjamin was excited from the point he got to sit next to his neighbor and asked him if he had taken hotdogs along.When they arrived at their destination they unpacked and Benjamin and Mathew took the little boat and went fishing, to catch the first meal of their trip. Half an hour later they returned with their catch, three big

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He was 25 at the time, and had his own small grocery shop, selling microwave food. A business that had worked out very well and 5 months he had started it, he could afford to buy his own house. The house that had made him the neighbor of Kate, Mathew and their 3-year-old son Benjamin. They were nice people, as he moved in it was the day before Benjamin’s third birthday and they were busy with the

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An uncomfortable feeling in his stomach pulled him back into the present. He looked up and saw that the sky had darkened it was soon getting night. He realized that he must have fallen asleep while remembering the events with Carla. He’d never seen his parents after the events and never felt the desire to see them. He was sure that they’d given up searching for him fairly soon after he was

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He started to delve his hands deeper into her body, targeting her heart, as she was still alive. He owed her death as she had given him life the way it should always have been. Carla had shown him how to accept love and how to give love. She’d shown him with her long slender legs what it means to enjoy being with somebody, to give and to receive. He found her heart and removed it with the

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Sure his mother undressed him as well right before she would give him a bath, but she never let him undress her, or watch her get undressed, since he was a baby his mother was undressed while bathing him, most of these bathing sessions, she would get into the tub with him, because there was no point in washing him, while she was dirty. And since 7 years she insisted him to wash her first

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Ten years after a car hit his dog, as he let his parents to believe, he’d met Clara. She was sitting behind him and just moved from the west coast. He really liked her and he thought the feeling was mutual. Clara was a typical Californian babe, blonde with blue eyes, long slender legs and always cheerful, as if nothing in the world could depress her. Everybody in school new that she would make

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...This one older, he must have been 4 or 5 years old. That Christmas he had gotten a dog, not a puppy like all other kids in school, but a grown up stray dog. Too old to learn new tricks, but he didn’t need a dog that could learn new tricks, he needed a dog that would sit still when he told it to do so, and that Bobby did. The dog would do anything if the reward would be to sit still. It didn’t

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He saw how he dug his bare hands up to his wrists in the motionless body of the woman. He guessed her at 40 years old, although scars around her ears suggested a recent face-lift. Judging by her clothes and the amount of jewelry she was wearing she must have been rich. But he didn’t care he never cared about money. Luxury was something that had never been on his mind. Although he came from a rich

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There he sat, wondering what he was doing. And after four days without food and only a bottle of water, which went foul two days ago he ignored the unsettling feeling in his stomach. He had forgotten the frozen pizza he had in the fridge. Even after 4 days of constant analysis of what he had done, he was still wondering what he was doing, or more accurate, he was wondering

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The Fingers The Fingers is a Psycho Thriller I started writing while I was working in the US and got bored in hotel rooms. It's been a work in progress ever since, and the whole idea now is to start posting the story through this blog.So what is it all about, it is about some person finding himself in an unknown place at an unknown time for an unknown reason. As he gets out of this not so good

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